This is a Free verse poem about the mighty SPLASH, this free verse poem is it's called this because you are free to right what ever you want to! In class we have been studying poetry, this is our 3rd piece of poetry we have learnt about this term!
Talofa Carleece, I like how you've created a name for your poem, that made me excited to read your poem. I can't believe this is your first time doing a free verse poem, and it's really desciptive and interesting. How do you do that? You're like a poem expert! I can't wait to see more poems from you Carleece! Maybe you could give me some tips about how you make your poem so interesting!
Hi Rose, Thanks for the great comment your getting better and better each week! I might need some extra tips on how to make a AWESOME comment like you just did! I would love to give you some tips, I dought that you will need them since your the master at poem's! What do you love about commenting on other peoples blog's? Can't wait to see more of your comments on my blog!
I have been looking at a presentation on someones blog from Owairka School, and they've ot some pretty good tips. If you want the link to the presentation, let me know. Well, I don't really call myself the "master" at poems. You're way better than me, I think YOU are the master at poems! :D And also, the thing I love about commenting on other people's blog is because I get to have a conversation with them and talk to them about their wonderful piece of work. I was wondering, could you please give me some tips about how to make a really descriptive free verse poem? Like what I said, you're the master a poems! Keep up the great work Carleece! :) :)
Hi Rose, I love how you are always trying to make your blog comments a 3A type of work! Maybe you need to help me sometime with comparing our work so I can see what I've forgotten and what I need to improve on. This will help me out alot and save heaps of time for me! I can't wait to see more of your AWESOME comments!
Saluton Carleece, I like how you have added words that pictures a vision in my mind. Great thinking and great describing the waves. Besides that this piece of work is amazing, descriptive, Interesting. I've got to say you are Fanatstice active learner in McCahon Class Well Done! (Master of Poems) Also I like your simile it really paints a great image in my mind. (Great Colour Choice too)
Hi Joshua, I'm loving how you always give every comment a new greeting! You could win the most greeting award! Never know, anyway thanks for the AWESOME comment I mite have to get some tips from you for better greeting's to start off my comment's with. We must meet sometime to discuss our comment starters! I can't wait to see more of your comments popping up on my blog!
Talofa Carleece,
ReplyDeleteI like how you've created a name for your poem, that made me excited to read your poem. I can't believe this is your first time doing a free verse poem, and it's really desciptive and interesting. How do you do that? You're like a poem expert! I can't wait to see more poems from you Carleece! Maybe you could give me some tips about how you make your poem so interesting!
Kind Reguards,
Rose
Hi Rose,
ReplyDeleteThanks for the great comment your getting better and better each week! I might need some extra tips on how to make a AWESOME comment like you just did! I would love to give you some tips, I dought that you will need them since your the master at poem's! What do you love about commenting on other peoples blog's? Can't wait to see more of your comments on my blog!
Thanks
Carleece
Hi Carleece,
ReplyDeleteI have been looking at a presentation on someones blog from Owairka School, and they've ot some pretty good tips. If you want the link to the presentation, let me know.
Well, I don't really call myself the "master" at poems. You're way better than me, I think YOU are the master at poems! :D
And also, the thing I love about commenting on other people's blog is because I get to have a conversation with them and talk to them about their wonderful piece of work. I was wondering, could you please give me some tips about how to make a really descriptive free verse poem? Like what I said, you're the master a poems! Keep up the great work Carleece! :) :)
From,
Rose
Hi Rose,
DeleteI love how you are always trying to make your blog comments a 3A type of work! Maybe you need to help me sometime with comparing our work so I can see what I've forgotten and what I need to improve on. This will help me out alot and save heaps of time for me!
I can't wait to see more of your AWESOME comments!
Thanks
Carleece
Saluton Carleece,
ReplyDeleteI like how you have added words that pictures a vision in my mind. Great thinking and great describing the waves. Besides that this piece of work is amazing, descriptive, Interesting. I've got to say you are Fanatstice active learner in McCahon Class Well Done! (Master of Poems) Also I like your simile it really paints a great image in my mind. (Great Colour Choice too)
From
Joshua
Hi Joshua,
DeleteI'm loving how you always give every comment a new greeting! You could win the most greeting award! Never know, anyway thanks for the AWESOME comment I mite have to get some tips from you for better greeting's to start off my comment's with.
We must meet sometime to discuss our comment starters!
I can't wait to see more of your comments popping up on my blog!
Thanks
Carleece